Whaea Pip was delighted with our smashing recount writing this week. Can you guess where we visited when you read our wonderful descriptions?
I'm cold although it was a very hot day - Evan
It was full of green trees and the path was bumpy - Elisa
We also got to look in the Weta motels, I saw two weta in the biggest motel - Dominic
Sticks crumbled under our feet - Makayla
I saw some sparkly wrinkles on the wet ground - Josh
I heard tweeting birds - Daniel
It was so cold I felt like ice - Abigail
We used the five senses to practice. It was smashing - Andrew
I saw gorgeous and beautiful birds - McKenna
I felt the gentle breeze blowing - Aimee
The ground was slushy - Jasper
I heard scrunching of sticks - Taylor
I couldn't wait to finish my fantastic writing - Kristina
It was cold and icy - Connor
The bush was creepy - Telson
I saw lots of native trees - Jacob
The bush was cold but I was steaming hot. I don't know if anybody else was! - Leto
The sounds in the bush were creepy and noisy - Sammie
Wonderful writing!
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