Tuesday, 21 May 2013

A walk to Featherston!?

We are becoming really good at writing narratives.  Tomorrow is Science Day which is very exciting, but it means we won't have much time for writing in the morning.  Because of this, Mrs Coombes gave us the start to our story and we wrote about the problem and how we would fix the problem (conclusion).  We wrote about Tuatara class walking over the Rimutaka Hill to visit Featherston.  At the top, there was a problem.  Here are some of the imaginative, exciting problems we came up with:

* A giant tuatara at the top of the hill.
* It turned out the Rimutaka Hill was actually an active volcano!
* There was a big hole at the top.
* The road exploded.  Boom!
* Some people didn't want to stop for a rest.
* There were so many cars that nobody could move.
* We got to the top and there was a whole other class of Tuatara kids - they looked just like us.
* There was a giant guarding the hill who took Renee.


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6 comments:

  1. What a great idea, walking to Featherston! I hope you managed to get the train home though! You have thought up some great problems to make your writing more exciting too.

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  2. What fantastic stories. I wonder how they will end? Jontys mum

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  3. We think you should share all your stories. You have come up with some amazing ideas and we are sure everyone who follows your blog would love to read each one of them. From Hannah's Aunty Lou and cousin Ambah

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  4. Great ideas. Would love to read more

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  5. Annabelle can't wait to be in Tuatara class!

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  6. your poems are lovely from abby

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